Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Blog Views.

Shayaa Abdus Samad- Viewing this bog was interesting. The topics were good but the way it was written was to realistic. Use less voice and more of correct grammar and punctuation.

Bibi Badriden- Strong topics. I enjoyed reading it. Maybe if the posts had more detail it would be VERY good (:

Fatima Baines- This was pretty much like a diary, try to connect more with the readers.

Denzel Barrett- No recent blogs were up. I was unable to rate the blog.

Andray Bramwell- This blog was very interesting. I liked the topics a lot. Make post longer (:

Claribel Checo- I loved the look and all of the pictures. There was a good attempt to connect with readers, but still seemed like a diary at times.

Clarissa Checo- This blog was one of my favorites. Reading the posts made me want to keep reading the rest. It was like any other teenage blog but kept the readers attention. The pictures went really well with the blog.

Amber Clarke- Only one blog was up, but you can tell there was a great deal of potential in the post. Keep up with the posts.

Chavaughn Cox-No recent posts.

Tashawna Dallas-This blog connected with readers and gave good advice.

Shanice Davy- Blog was also helpful to teenagers going through stressful school stuff or even everyday life.

Ruthnie Degand- Connected with readers very well. Take more time to go into detail with topics.

Tiffany Evans-Keeps up with recent events. Careful with grammar though. I liked this blog, interesting to look at. (Especially since theres a picture of Chris Brown ) (:  *thumbs up* (:

Tierra Green- Goes into a great deal of effort with certain topics, which makes the blog interesting to read!

Tuesdae Imperial- Effort is made with detail for posts. If there was more pictures, the blog would be really good.

Jessica Lopez-Love this blog. Theres all all different types of topics. I can really relate to Jessica's blog, especially when it comes to relationship drama.

Sara Michele Louis- The blog topics are really good. I see advice being given but sometimes it flows of to be a diary. Carefullll(:

Shanice Lynch- NO recent blogs. But from reading what you have written previously, it seems like you update it to be like your life. Try not to focus on only you, try and bring topics that could relate to the readers. Ask questions that might have people puzzled.

Adale Matthews- Enjoy reading the poems on this blog. I like how its on many various topics, not just focused to certain topics only males/females can relate to.

Natural Parker- Enjoy how you speak to the readers by using your own voice and keeping it  grammatically correct at the same time. You great topics is really good. (: Try to make the posts a little longer.

Chavonne Parkes- Your blog is a lot of fun to look at, with the color and all the pictures. There is a lot of information on latest fashions which is really good.

Anthony Persaud- You blog is very informative with technology and other stuiff, but try to use topics that others would want to read too. Keep it a little more fun.

Katerine Ramirez- You have a good personality, use t in your blogs, but make it less like a journal. Although people may connect with the "journal entries" talk as if with the reader rather then informing them on your life.

Danielle Satz- This blog is too much like a diary. Not everyone wants to read about your current events going on in your life. Your topics are good just connect to readers.

Madhu Sharma- The pictures are really cool and interesting, try and write a little more though.

Dejon Spears-Sports is a great topic so your blogs on that are very interesting. Keep the blog updated with the games and latest news!

Jermain Trim-I really enjoyed this blog. It has different topics with the recent news. One blog i found interesting was the one about the women dumping the baby in trash. its terrible what the world has come to.  I could never imagine a mother doing such a terrible thing to a new born, no matter what the reason may be...

Amina Zafar- The blog is interesting, especially learning about the weddings in Pakistan. Continue updating your blog and writing a little more and this blog should be visited often. (:

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